Feedback for Edmond

Hi Edmond,

Great start to the story. The introduction is good too. The story flows naturally and the characters are given a description of how they fit in the story - e.g the main character's Naruto and Kakashi. I was thinking that maybe a title to the story would be good. The illustration in the story is a good thing. I think this is because it gives us an idea of what they look like in the story. There is good background information on Naruto and his family's history. I think the story is entertaining and fun when it includes the Batman character from Gotham in the story.