When the sun rises, birds sing beautifully which call the naturals up. Naruto opens his eyes, he looks on his left hand side, where his teacher-Kakashi normally sleeps next to him. However, he finds that he disappears.
He gets up and has a stretch, looks around and sees all the gears are still inside his tent. After he dresses up, he hears a big bomb sound outside.
"Hey Naruto, we're heading to a place where is called Gotham soon. I got some fresh fruits and meat to prepare for this journey. Come and give me a hand!"
"Wait Kakashi sensei, where is Gotham? Why do we go there? How are we going to there?"
"You will know after you get there Naruto, pack up and I have booked the ship to there at 12pm. We only have 3 hours left to arrive at the harbor. Come on! You will experience a lot of new things during this journey, it's worth."
They leaves the camp site at 11pm, on the way to harbor, Naruto keeps asking what his training will be next. Because he wants to get stronger as soon as possible to be the strongest Ninja in the world. Naruto's parents died when he was born. His parents were famous Ninja and people respect them as a hero. Nine years ago, Naruto's father was Kakashi's tutor. During the second world ninja war. He sacrificed himself to save the village to interchange the peace. Before he was killed, he told Kakashi to look after his son, Naruto, and trained him as a good Ninja in he future. Therefore, Kakashi put all painstaking care into his hero's son.
When they see the ship, the bow of the ship is a bear head. A big skeleton head with a cross on the black canvas.
"Welcome to Golden Murri! It's the best ship in the world! You're so lucky to travel on it! Wahahahahaha!"
"Welcome! I'm sorry he's out stupid captain Rufi. Hi two lovely ninja, my name is Nami. The navigator on this ship. I know Mr Kakashi has already booked to go to Gotham City. The trip will last around 2 days from here. Hope you enjoy your trip! We have also got a doctor, cook, and entertainer. So if you need any helps just tell one of us!"
"Kakashi sensei, they're so pro! but I want to ask, are they pirates? Look at their canvas." Naruto whispers to Kakashi.
"Um, I'm not sure Naruto. But I think we can handle them if they really try to rob us. Don't worry, don't you believe in your strength?" Kakashi smiles to Naruto.
At the first night, Captain Rufi holds a welcome party for Kakashi and Naruto. They share their dream with each other.
"Hi guys! My name is Naruto! I want to be the best Ninja in the world! And my first target is beat up Kakashi sensei!"
"Hey Naruto! I'm Rufi! I have the same dream as you! I want to be the best Captain in the world. Although we pretend we are privates, we are not! We pretend we're privates after we nearly got vanished by a bloody animal in Gotham! His name is Batman! We found out we're too kind to people so we needed to pretend to be a bad guy!"
"Who is the Batman?" Naruto asks.
"Batman was once a superheros in Gotham. He usually comes out at night, just like a bat. And his gears are really designed like a bat. Therefore, people call him the Batman." Kakashi bends his head down and looks anxious.
"Kakashi sensei, how come you know so many information about that man?"
"Because he's famous, Naruto! You should read more newspaper rather than only train up your body!"
"Understand! Kakashi sensei!"
"By the way, how come your team would get vanished by Batman?" Kakashi asked Rufi.
"Well, one year ago, we traveled to Gotham city and wanted to fulfill our supplies for the next travel. However, Batman pretended he was a baggar and begged us to help him. So we took him to our ship. At night he turned into Batman and robbed our food and gold when we were sleeping. I was waken by the noise he made. We couldn't beat him as he had too many crazy weapons. He even destroyed our ship without any reasons! He must be jealous that we owned a big ship!" Rufi yelled.
On the second day afternoon, they arrive at Gotham's harbor.
"Hey Kakashi and Naruto! Good luck on Gotham! Remember to watch out the bastard!" Rufi and Nami remind.
"Thanks guys, we'll beat him when we meet him! Trust us!" Naruto says with graping his fist hardly.
"Alright let's go Naruto!" Kakashi says.
Naruto and Rufi hug each other. Naruto is very happy to meet a new friend who can admit his dreams. In his village, everyone tease at him when he tells his dream, only Kakashi appreciates this young kid has potentials and patience to fulfill his dream. Therefore, he wants to train up Naruto to help him.
"Kakashi sensei, what's our training here?"
"Um, I have thought one last night. Let's beat up Batman!"
"Oh! Are you sure!? Are we able to do that?"
"I'm not sure, but we can have a bet!" Kakashi stares at Naruto.
They walk around and find a hotel to stay for a week. Kakashi asks the counter for a room for 2 people.
"You're so lucky sir, there is one room left. Here is your key. The room is 1408. Enjoy your night."
Kakashi takes over the key and goes to the room with Naruto. After they unpack all the stuffs, they leave the hotel and find something to eat. They go into a cafe, sit down and order some sandwiches.
"Hey Alfred, I think I'll visit the jewel shop tonight. Prepare the gears for me later." A big man says.
"Sure my master, good luck tonight." Alfred replies.
"Hey Kakashi sensei, I want to visit the jewel shop as well. I want to see big diamonds!"
.....to be continued
Thursday, September 25, 2008
Draft for fanfic
Posted by Edmond at 8:00 AM
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2 comments:
Hiya
I read your fiction on yesterday.
But I do think it is a good start, however, be aware the story flow and do you plan the story aftewards ?
Will you use the story plan like
mythic structure (i.e 10% intro)
Just curious about, what do you after you beat Batman ?
Alan
Hey Alan,
Thank you for your comment! I’m going to talk about the fight between Naruto, Kakashi and Batman in Gotham City, furthermore, I’ll mention about the room 1408 a little bit referring to the movie <1408>.
I think I’ll add some photos of Luffy and his team. So you guys can understand more for my story. Thanks.
Edmond
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