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Thursday, November 6, 2008

Ideas on Tim's tale

I would like to live in the Paradise Beach if it were a real place. It is depicted as a sanctuary for the urban people who are tired of daily routine. ‘They were able to see sand dunes, and a golden sand beach filled with the most amazing things, like canoes, paddler boats and a cafe that always had food no matter how much food you wanted to eat’.

I never visited such beach before and cannot describe the beach like Tim does without visiting it in person. All the beaches in Hong Kong are very crowded and water there is soiled. I guess Tim must have gone to one of such beautiful beaches. As Edmond suggests, Tim should have attached some photos of the beach to his story. This may make the story more interesting and attractive.

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